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Karma's Toll
Contributed by
Zepher
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 11:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All the pain in my life I've brought on myself
Other people just helped it along
My punishment does fit my crime my love, so don't think that it's you in the wrong.
You reep what you sow
And I've sown quite a bit
Now I can't take back any of it
The hurt that I've caused to so many out there
Is now turning around and coming right back here
I did not mean to hurt
I really tried to care
But when it came right down to it
My mind it was not there
I did what I was told like a puppet on a string
But the descisions were still mine and that means everything
So don't feel guilty my dear that your love for me has gone away
This is just karma catching up with me
This is my price to pay
Why should I have a perfect love
The love I've wanted all my life
When all I've done these past few years is caused others so much strife
As much as I want, I can't change the past
We both know that to be true
But I still wish I knew then what I know now
That the price I'ld be paying was you
Copyright ©
Zepher
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2003-11-06 11:13:25]
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by Edubs on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 11:45:48 AM AEST
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What a great poem! I often go back and fourth regarding Karma, and this was honest and true to form.
Enjoyed reading this, thanks.
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by irshprnss on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:28:24 PM AEST
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This was a great poem. I think alot of people would benefit from reading this before they lose their love.
Diana
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by silverspectre on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:25:05 PM AEST
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| what you say is tru and the last line sums it up for those who realized the same way that we reap what we sow.~Silver~ |
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:35:41 PM AEST
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| well done for being honest. dont beat your self up to much you learnt your lesson and everyone makes mistakes.... |
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 02:22:05 PM AEST
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Well done, your poem was honest, emotional and with meaning.
A great write |
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by katzie on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 05:10:08 PM AEST
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| I love your poem! It made me think. Wow It was great.... |
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 06:11:57 PM AEST
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| Excellent write .... very profound ... enjoyed reading this very much ... Jan |
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Re: Karma's Toll
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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| so true..well written..excellent....we have to taste the fruits of karma..venkat |
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