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Last Good-Hug
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 05:45:58 PM in AEST
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Firmly I congested my arms round your body
Blood rushed to my head like airflow
One last Time I felt the source of my heart beats
So close to my soul to my self even closer than my shadow!
I call that The last good-hug
Your breath sounded blinking
Warmness is still running
A bridge of fire between our eyes
Today I m free
A day of wickedness still ahead
And then I fly
Past the clouds, the atmosphere and the stars
Milky way isnt my galaxy anymore
But my love
The one I lived for.
Now I m dead, But I lived so far
I ll miss it I ll miss you
Hold me tight One last Good-hug
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cant-skate
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2003-11-06 17:45:58]
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Re: Last Good-Hug
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST
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This is a very peaceful, loving, and sad write, great combination....I really liked the way you wrote it, Well done.
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Re: Last Good-Hug
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by jaeann on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 08:22:41 PM AEST
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| wow.......i feel a last long night ...tangled in the sheets in the moonlight........... |
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