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Devil's love!
Contributed by
kalika_vidya
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:38:44 AM in AEST
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Devils wear beautiful masks of love
Spirits dance around them with love
To show that hell is a place of love
They invite souls with smiles of love
When souls jump into hell with love
With false hopes to find joys of love
They throw the souls into fires of love
Then celebrate their victory with love
Thus poor souls never find that love
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Re: Devil's love!
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by M2003UK on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 11:14:24 AM AEST
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| interesting..liked it.. |
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Re: Devil's love!
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by jaeann on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
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| interesting write........they invite souls........ i like that part.......... |
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Re: Devil's love!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 01:19:33 AM AEST
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| interesting write |
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Re: Devil's love!
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by garyh on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
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| yeah.... very interesting indeed... i agree with you on this.. to some extent anyways. |
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Re: Devil's love!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 10:00:09 PM AEST
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| Powerful use of repetition...I concur with everyone else except garyh. |
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Re: Devil's love!
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:09:38 AM AEST
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I agree with you up to a point but somewhere along the line we stop being slaves of our hormones and aquire discernment.
The devils masks don't fool us any more!
I would love to see a second verse??????
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Re: Devil's love!
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by chandramohan on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 07:11:04 AM AEST
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Love is life....
Devils wont find love..
well written..
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Re: Devil's love!
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by Stitch on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:51:11 AM AEST
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Oh, this one hit home! You are a very insightful poet. Concise, complete, and just plain well written. Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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