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If...
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 11:23:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If i told you my name, Would you remember it tomorrow
If i dont find fortune and fame, Would you fly like a sparrow
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2003-11-07 11:23:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 1 ) by R1NX on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 11:35:38 AM AEST (User
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hi i no were u liv! ha ha ha........... dat poem was DEEP. FRM R1NX! c u at skool on monday!!!!! fite d power! |
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:52:40 PM AEST (User
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short and very cute. i love it! i hope that person is not a sparrow |
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:53:58 PM AEST (User
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short, simple and rhetorical. very delightful |
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:54:56 PM AEST (User
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Always good to make sure! excellent write. |
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:56:53 PM AEST (User
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If you asked me that i would probably forget your name and fly. However this is a good poem with questions of value. |
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Re: If...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:30:35 AM AEST (User
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just a few simple words but you could think so much into this, nice bit of thinking.
wildejohnny |
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