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One Last Breath
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 07:03:46 PM in AEST
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I'm sitting in my room,
and it's hard to breathe.
My bodies weak,
and I can't move,
I'm paralyed,
and there's so much pain running through my body.
There's sweat running down my face,
and my heart is slowly stopping.
I'm so panic stricken,
I don't know what to do.
I fall to the ground,
with a loud bang,
breathing slower with every breath.
I fear that I will die,
for there is no one here to help.
But before I could finish my thought,
I take my last breath,
and slowly faded away into my death.
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sugar0986
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2003-11-07 19:03:46]
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Re: One Last Breath
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by Trisha on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 09:40:22 PM AEST
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Re: One Last Breath
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:25:46 AM AEST
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Oh, hugs, Brittany, I hope you have brighter days girl
Love,
Ellen |
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