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take it all back
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take your smile back
it only decieves my eyes
Turn your starry eyes away from me they don't
shine with love for me
Don't give me those tender kisses
they are not sincere
take this tangled soul back
it is still a part of you
Take your empty cold heart
the shards of ice pierce my heart with pain
Take back all your empty promises
I don't wan them
Stop telling me you care
when you know deep down you could
care less
JEnna
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2003-11-08 16:32:55]
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Re: take it all back
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:47:08 PM AEST
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It really is sad how many guys are really like that, but just as many girls are like that too. It hurts to be used, but don't let it hold you back from recieving the love from another that you deserve.
Nicely expressed
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Re: take it all back
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by stargazer on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:19:24 PM AEST
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The worst feeling in the world is being denied false love... and actually believing them. This poem was amazing... I look forward to more.
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Re: take it all back
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by Destiny on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:25:16 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, alot of emotion.
~Des |
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Re: take it all back
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by michelled43 on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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| you express yourself well.....i am going through the same thing right now but i cant get him out of my head......keep strong and keep loving like you have never had a broken heart |
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