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Faced with Reality
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 06:45:34 PM in AEST
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What happened to the little girl in the picture
What happened to those happy moments, happy lives
What happened to all those good times
What made her into someone who cut with knives
The smiles, the cries of joy
It was all a ploy
A pretence from the gods
Lies from above
Pretending that life
Was nothing other than love
Where did that pretty face go
Why did I let it see the truth, reality
Why couldnt I have kept it behind those curls
Why did I show it this worlds brutality?
Ahh, the bliss, the innocence
The hearts, joined as one
Now they see what she saw
Now all that love has gone
Why did I let her fall so hard
Why did I let her tear them apart
One too many in the family
Hidden secrets of pain in her heart
Why did I let her grow up
(Can you see the emptiness in their eyes)
Why didnt I make her life stop
(Can you hear the despair in their cries)
Why didnt I end it all long ago
(Watch their expressions go numb as the tear dries)
I reached out, but did nothing, and her eyes grew sad
I saw everything she did that she knew was bad
I watched as she withdrew from mum and dad
I knew she was losing everything she had
I knew her
I knew her so well
Then things changed and it all began to swell
And we all saw her face begin to grow old
We all saw her getting more weary and cold
We all saw the terror inside her unfold
The story was telling itself
The one that had been left untold
I see her now, I see her looking deep into my eyes
I see her understand what, where and why
I hold her within and begin to cry
This happiness, this state of being, this is for what and why
As we bid depression goodbye
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:09:46 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this .. very touching keep up the good work
peace and joy JENNA |
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:44:05 PM AEST
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As we bid depression goodbye
VERY strong line I loved this spoke volumes to me a beautiful write. Loved it.
Bobo (joel) |
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by irshprnss on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 08:02:37 PM AEST
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Great Write!! Has a very strong point. Would make an awesome song!
Diana
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:38:23 AM AEST
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Awesome write! VERY touching, it drew me in right from the start and didn't let go till it was over. It spoke to me. Great job.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by Razor_Blade_Kisses on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 03:53:41 PM AEST
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| Your poem just ruled! Damn your talent (and i mean this in a complimentary way). How do you do it? |
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by M on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 11:50:58 AM AEST
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Charlotte, this is beautiful. I'm so proud of you for coming this far, and one day we will all bid depression goodbye.
Love xXx |
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Re: Faced with Reality
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by arden on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 04:11:41 PM AEST
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thats..wow really really good.
awesome! post more soon.
Arden |
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