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total capacity
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 10:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the mating is like a whirlwind
velocity of unfurled wings
fearsome speeds
race inside the runways
between sleek silver ribs
the engines roar out load
the sound goes on forever
to the ends of the universe
unparrallelled
naked dignity unfolds
full of unspoken promises
forbidding caution to intecede
moving forward with single purpose
well met in the darkness
this night was total capacity
~merry~
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merry
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2003-11-10 10:22:53]
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Re: total capacity
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 03:42:30 PM AEST
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| Wow, can I relate to this! Love your use of metaphors ... especially like the first two lines ... great write Merry ... Jan |
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Re: total capacity
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:41:51 PM AEST
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Wow, Merry, even I can remember this....even at 66!
Splendid Write!! I loved your timing...just right!
Love,
lovingcritters
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Re: total capacity
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 10:41:10 PM AEST
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Wow..great write, Merry..
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