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Let me Help you

Contributed by lil_angel on Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 08:34:05 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



I see as you pick up the knife I plead with not to
I look you in the eyes
my worst fears are confirmed with a glance
into your icy blue eyes

You arn't your self but this isnt the anserw
You are hurting and i can see that but this isnt the anserw
I begin to push through your defence
I am breaking you and causing you so much pain

Please forgive me i am doing this cause i love you
Your eyes are pleading with me to continue since you know this is what you need
I am nearing the final layer

You begin to cry i hold you close to me
your tears soak through my shirt
continue crying it is for the best
let out all the pain i know you keep hidden

As I push past the final layer i see you break
As i am holding you i can hear you whisper
"thank-you sister" i whisper back your welcome brother
Your welcome.





Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2002-08-24 08:34:05]
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Re: Let me Help you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:53:37 AM AEST
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To be there when someone is in need , is the best thing you can do in any relationship. You are a true friend
Great poem




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