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GoodBye my brother?
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 08:38:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I just couldnt handle it anymore
I know I made you a promise and I am ashamed to say that I broke it
When you find out and I know you will
Please dont get mad at me for that just makes me to want to do it more
I had to punish myself for I had failed
Please try to understand
I didnt mean to cause you all this pain
That is why I am hiding it from you
You mean the world to me
But since our trip I am unsure if you feel the same
What I thought would bring us closer
In fact tore us apart
If you chose to leave me
Please remember the good times
Forget the fights and the times of anger
Can you do that for me? Please thats the last thing I beg of you
I love you and will miss you
But I guess if it ends it wasnt meant to be
I will miss our talks and your hugs
But this might be for best
I love you dear brother
But if you want me to let go I will
For I love you to much to hurt you any more
I love you and good bye?
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Re: GoodBye my brother?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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| I lost my brother for 15 years because of family strife...thanks to God, we are brothers again after all this time. Dont give the fight my friend. Time is the healer of all wounds Great, emotional write. Larry |
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Re: GoodBye my brother?
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:33:40 PM AEST
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| This is really good. Although it reminds me of my brother, my mom and dad are going to chase him away ,actionally I think they already did. I don't think he'll come back. Nicely written by the way keep up the work. |
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