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Goodbye
Contributed by
Melli
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:04:46 PM in AEST
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oops
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Goodbye
I've just come to say goodbye
Because now I have to go
Living with this life
Is making me so low
Your thinking is so agrivating
So this I must say
You're giving me a headache
Just from yesterday
You thought you were indestructable
Now I proved you wrong
I've been living with this life
For many years to long
You've gave me the sunshine
You've gave me the rain
Now I'm really tired
Of this strong ongoing pain
I've just come to say goodbye
Because now I have to go
I'm getting really tired
Of you making me so low
Goodbye
Copyright ©
Melli
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2003-11-11 19:04:46]
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Re: Goodbye
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by doug on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:11:20 PM AEST
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sounds like you are sad and frustrated
hope you feel better soon. nice write |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 11:06:44 PM AEST
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Good poem! Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Hardy Parkerson,
Lake Charles, LA
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