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My Life
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What Do They Have That I Don't?
What Can I Have That They Don't Have?
Four Me To Want You I'll Have To Not
Want You. What You Can't Have You'll Get.
I Can't Find AnyOne Like You The Feel's Don't
Come Just To AnyOne. Making Love Just
Isn't A Feeling It's More To It.
Speak To Me Show Me That You're Here With
Me. Hold Me To Let Me Know You're Here.
I Am Afraid To Let You Have Control How
Prefect EveryThing Is How Bad EveryThing Is
How Horrible EveryThing Will Be.
I Need Time To Think Here. I'll Still Want You.
I Need You In My Life. I Want Your Touch.
I Want Your EveryThing. I Need You Back InTo My Life
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2003-11-11 20:41:23]
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Re: My Life
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by katzie on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:43:48 PM AEST
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| I think it was good.. but I got confused reading and had to go back a couple of times. Maybe i'm just challenged in this area or something idk... |
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Re: My Life
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by doug on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:57:44 PM AEST
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definitely conveys emotion
a good read, keep it up |
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Re: My Life
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 11:47:40 PM AEST
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really good poem trisha
~Brittany~ |
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Re: My Life
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 10:19:20 AM AEST
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I know I felt like that at first. Just hang in there things will get better. I hope it all works out for you
Jeff |
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