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two little butterflies n' a rose
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 02:20:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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two little butterflies
whispering tales to the flowers,
fly around the blooms
during the daylight hours,
"tell me about love,"
whispered she to him,
and in leaned all the flowers
to hear him then begin...
he looked into her eyes
when she flew beneath a rose,
"love is bigger than the skies,
true love will always know."
two pairs of butterfly wings
oh, faire gentle breezes blew,
flittering upon petals, as
straight to her heart he flew.
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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| Ooh.. sooo..beautifully written.. it is like a sweet tale of love in a flower garden..Good luck. venkat |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:27:25 AM AEST
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Yesss...I've seen you and Phil a few times fluttering around my garden amongst the lavender and ladies purses LOL..
Just keep it clean ok..theres kids around *winks*
This is soooo sweet..very melodic
Hugs and Moosh
LW |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:45:45 AM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:59:31 AM AEST
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OMG Ness, this is so very beautiful.....
Miss ya..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:17:41 AM AEST
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Sounds like our true lady is fawning over with the butterflies!!! This is as sweet as any garden I could ever know!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 02:16:14 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful ... love the soft feeling of this poem Nessa .... Jan |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:35:44 AM AEST
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dito!
Awesomely beautifull!
Thanks for all your sweet reveiws on my poems!
peace, joy, luv, butterflies,
emy |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:44:43 AM AEST
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Nessa...this is...sigh....it's so.....sigh. You write of love and romance to perfection. Just beautiful.
Roses my friend :o)
Larry |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:21:02 AM AEST
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That's SO pretty!!!!! Wonderful little story!
~ Dee |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 09:13:30 PM AEST
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oh i love this - it is so sweet and i can see those two little butterflies whispering - you make love sound so .......perfect
happy smile
merry |
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Re: two little butterflies n' a rose
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:53:57 AM AEST
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I love butterflies and roses !!!
Really a beautiful write. |
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