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Lonely Girl
Contributed by
BlueStar
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:06:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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There once was a girl
who couldn't take it anymore
she'd had enough
she didn't see what the point of living was
she felt alone
though she had friends and family
no one seemed to care
or even be there
crying every night with pain inside
she didn't know how to deal
she turned to drugs
and she changed a great deal
but still no one noticed
they were all too busy to care
they soon came to realize
what they were doing was wrong
but it was too late
she overdosed
and was already gone
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BlueStar
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2003-11-12 16:06:43]
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:10:29 PM AEST
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great write.. im sure alot of people can relate to that ...
peace
JENNA |
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