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Fate Fell Short
Contributed by
stargazer
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 05:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It was summer in your bedroom-
and fate began to fall short.
Brace your hand in mine,
that way we can always be together.
Maybe we should linger in our memories,
and forget being more than friends.
Maybe this is wrong,
But relax, fate will tell for sure.
I really like this feeling.
Place your hand in mine...
that way we can leave when we want too.
Copyright ©
stargazer
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2003-11-12 17:37:21]
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Re: Fate Fell Short
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 05:39:30 PM AEST
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| I liked this, it gave off an odd sense of innocence. I don't know if you meant for that but it was there for me. |
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Re: Fate Fell Short
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:37:45 PM AEST
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Umm, listen to Blink 182 maybe? Holy *****..just turn their song into a poem, why don't you? You're so origional.
Too bad it's Sarcastic Saturday! |
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