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Tears of Poetry
Contributed by
doug
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 06:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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she cries tears of poetry
out from her emerald eyes
she cries from her love for me
a love she can't deny
she stands and draws her curtains
her room engulfed in black
a flower dressed in sorrow
I'm never coming back
she weeps into her pillow
as I stand and watch above her
she cries tears of poetry
oh God how I did love her
the angels they are crying
the summer rains pour down
a flower dressed in sorrow
they put me in the ground
for it was in the summer
that I met with my demise
now she cries tears of poetry
out from her emerald eyes
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doug
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2003-11-12 18:02:18]
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Re: Tears of Poetry
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 06:22:24 PM AEST
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| sandy is crying to...very beautiful and touching.since you are alive please show the one your love and never let anything make you argue over.it is not worth it..but the time you spend together is very short.so enjoy each moment that you have...beautiful beautiful poem.thanks for sharing....... |
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Re: Tears of Poetry
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 08:33:17 PM AEST
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| dearest doug, this is so sad and beautiful, excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tears of Poetry
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:34:00 PM AEST
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Doug, this is so heartfelt... brought a tear to my eyes... Sandy gave some good advice... follow it..
Jenni |
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Re: Tears of Poetry
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 12:01:20 AM AEST
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Ok the tears are flowing now!
Wow what a write this was,how did you get through this???????? Christina |
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Re: Tears of Poetry
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by irshprnss on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:44:29 AM AEST
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Great Write! Very emotional, touched emotions most poetry cant.
Your Friend-
Diana |
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