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unattainable
Contributed by
zeppchic420
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 06:55:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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unattainable- the warmth of his hand grazing over mine the sweetness of his kiss whispering to my smile unattainable- his eyes staring into my soul his voice making me whole - the smoke circles around your head and it strikes me how unattainable you are how could i ever be a ####### in those eyes? why would you ever catch me if i were to fall? im miniscule compared to those hands you're simply unattainable -- sadness encompasses me as i sit in your room knowing ill never wake up in that bed --- it never fails-i smile each time i think about you your eyes, your smile your hair, everything wonderful about you which is everything of course im just a faded picture, a piece of memory that only takes up space in your mind you don't even think of me, im sure ---- you never followed me when i ran from your room i sat in my car waitng for your plea for forgiveness I though maybe you didn't mean to empty my soul i finally just drove away and left my heart in your hands, along with the dagger you piercede it with I always knew you were unattainable
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Re: unattainable
(User Rating: 1 ) by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:04:05 PM AEST (User
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wow this is really good...sad and deep but very good i liked it ALOT good job and keep writing |
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Re: unattainable
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:06:04 PM AEST (User
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very good |
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