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The Endless meanings of Love
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:18:25 PM in AEST
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The Endless meanings of Love
Love was not meant to be menial,
It was meant to be said with courage and fear,
squirming in the heart at the same moment.
Love is no longer what it was,
It is useless and common day.
No longer the meaning of old,
Am I Nostalgic?
I love you.
Is it real?
Is it true?
I don’t know.
What does it mean to you?
Is there a checklist for love?
You bet your a$$ there is!
Are there levels?
No. Only classes.
Parent. Child. Friend. Romance.
Parental love is the strongest of them all.
Standing tall and brute high above the wall.
Not teetering, not wavering,
A parent’s love for their child is unable to be destroyed,
If one’s child is bad they still love them.
If one’s child is wrong they still love them.
They will kill for their children,
They are physically half their children.
This is why it is so strong,
Why would you hurt yourself?
A child’s love is weak,
Most able of them all to be beaten and broken.
Often set at a young age,
Love from a child is taught and earned,
When taught right and given respect.
A child is the most volatile,
Most pure and clear love existing,
If the parent is taken away the child will die inside,
Never to be returned, only forgotten,
A child is like a soldier if the parent is threatened.
Give them the chance to hurt those that hurt their parents,
And it WILL be taken.
A friends love has the most potential,
It is more strong than that of a child’s love,
A friend love is the most difficult to have and upkeep,
If one’s friend is good, pure, and cares for one, a friend love is able.
Plutonic love is what it could be called.
It is a love that takes years and years to truly earn,
And is the most easy to give up at,
When it is earned it is the most beautiful love there is to have.
You love your friend as if they were your sibling.
Almost as if they were you!
It is not clouded by physical attraction.
It is the most easy to spot when had.
You will KILL for your loved friend.
A romance love is a cherished one,
Like an undying sign of humans affection.
It is the most wanted.
It is the hardest to truly know.
It is the easiest to achieve.
It is the most different form of love.
There is a checklist for romance love,
Answer these all these statements yes and you have love:
I want to spend the rest of my life with you and I will love you forever.
My body is yours and yours completely and alone.
I will be there for you whether what I am there for is pleasing to me or not.
If you are ever harmed by anyone I will so deeply want even if I cannot to do to them what they did to you.
I will kill for you.
written by mick miller
{except for one word i edited lol}
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ladyfawn
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Nomie on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:23:06 PM AEST
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| that was awsome! i really think he should make an account! I "loved" this poem! =) |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by doug on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:27:43 PM AEST
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| you do have talent, your poem is well thought out and nicely written. hope you send in more |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:30:31 PM AEST
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Man, Mick, bro, I love you and everything....
BUT GET YOUR OWN ACCOUNT! LOL!
This was great. Didn't know you had a poetic side to you, but then again it seems to be running in the family... Okay, won't get bigheaded now. *grins sheepishly then laughs*
Love, Mars |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 08:14:46 PM AEST
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Hey Ness...You should not have posted this here... you should have encouraged him to open his own account.. you know why?? HE HAS POTENTIAL... this is a damn good poem... and he should write more. One can see lots of thought went into this...
To Micky...please open your own account and grace us with more of your lovely poems...
Hugs,
Aunti Jenni
Oh...and Ness, thanks for posting this...:>) |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:59:55 PM AEST
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OMG This was great whats he so afraid of?
We are all nice here!LOL!
Tell him to break down & just do it hes got TALENT! Christina |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
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Wonderful analysis..he has great potential..
there is no doubt..I commend Mick miller..I think he is your son..blessings to him.
there is only one spell mistake which I must point out for his guidence..
Platonic love: pure taintless love
Plutonic love: demonic love..
but that may be a spell mistake by oversight..
let him open an account...venkat
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:40:40 AM AEST
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Spelling schmelling... I am the worst speller on this site and everyone knows it . lol You write words from the heart and thats all that matters. Well done and join please. Mostly because I wont be the only one here then who cant spell worth a damn! LMAO
Very well done my friend .
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 11:30:39 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem Mick ... you obviously have great talent ... such a deep, thoughtful write ... looking forward to reading more of your poetry ... Jan |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 11:45:11 PM AEST
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WOW! You have a talent mick,and it sounds kinda unanimous!!! WE WANT YOU!!!
:::::::points finger at you:::::::: Join us,we are kind,loving people who deeply appreciate art!
And young man,you put art into words!!!
NOW LETS SEE MORE....UNDER MICKS NAME!!!! 0:-) ::::clapclapclap::::::
:::::listens to roaring crowd:::::::
Angel always...godspeed...joni!!! |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:56:05 PM AEST
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| Mick, what a pleasure to read, this write is so very true, and beautiful, thanks Nessa for sharing this with us and yes he should start an account, hugs Val |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 09:18:10 PM AEST
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talent runs in the family - wonderful poem Mick. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
merry |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:55:36 AM AEST
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| You did a perfect job of defining love. |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:58:57 PM AEST
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well, mick has finally opened an account, lol, thank you everyone for encouragment to him, his other poem is Beauty, user name: livinsociety
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=33269
hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: The Endless meanings of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:22:38 AM AEST
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| I DON'T CONSIDER WHAT I READ A POEM MORE THAN A STORY. A POEM HAS A DIFFERENT MEANING FOR ALL WHO READ IT AND I REITERATE ITS MORE LIKE A TRUTHFUL STORY. THERE'S A REAL DIFFERENCE BETWEEN LOVE AND BEING IN LOVE DON'T CONFUSE THE TWO NOR MAKE THEM AS ONE IN THE SAME. |
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