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Betrayal
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Friendships shall be important,
And trust must be depended upon.
If there is no trust, there shall be no Friendship.
Trusting is something I find difficult.
Depending on them is a hard thing to do.
Should I ever depend on a friend,
A friend that I care for, I may be betrayed.
No; I have been betrayed.
I'm tired of being betrayed.
I'm about to do something about it.
What I know not.
Betrayed by a person whom
I thought I could trust.
Many have betrayed me.
I'm getting sick and tired of it.
I now know friends are hard to come by.
It may seem like they're nice,
But then it's like you were slapped in the face.
They may start talking about you,
Spreading rumors and lies,
They may even try to start a fight.
Then you learn you've been betrayed.
Well, I've got something to say.
Keep in your mind that of the three-fold law.
I'm sick of everything. What comes around,
Goes around. Fate has already gotten back one
Git. She's pregnant, married, and unhappy.
I hate hating old friends.
Yet, they mess up.
I never get close.
And I'm about to say screw off to everyone.
Yet there are those that care for me as a friend.
Those that would never betray me.
Blessed Be, Sandra, Dee, Becca, and Lucie.
Ah... Blessed Be to you too, Mom, Kelli, and Mick.
Copyright ©
Angelic_Demon
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2003-11-12 19:38:56]
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Re: Betrayal
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 08:25:08 PM AEST
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Mara, this is a poem I can truly relate to... That first verse really hit home for me... because I believe the same thing.... I really enjoyed reading this... and can understand where you're coming from...but hang on to faith..there are FRIENDS out there...
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Re: Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:21:37 PM AEST
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Heh hun!
You dont need people who'll betray you hun, just remebed your perfect the way you arem your pretty, you have a great sense of humour, you're smart and are a generally nice person
Dont let people get you down, you dont need them and there are lots of people out their just dying to meet you
All my love 'n hugs
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Re: Betrayal
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 08:43:25 AM AEST
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mara honey, this is so true, there are many aquaintences in life and but a handful of true honest friends that will ever be there for you, hold them close for they are your gold, and the warm blanket that will wrap around your dreams, and keep your heart safe:) hugs n' lotsa big love, mom xxx...
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Re: Betrayal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:23:51 PM AEST
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Mara,
Very good poem. I told you at school today that it's 'Shakespearean,' and it is, but in a good way. Lol! Better than what he wrote.
And yes, it's true that it's hard to find real friends... but even true friends make mistakes, just like sisters sometimes hurt each other. ^_^
Thank you for the mention. That was sweet. *giggles* Love ya'.
Kelli |
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Re: Betrayal
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:19:28 AM AEST
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Yeah, people can be real buttholes. But there are always a few special ones who, even if they're not always in your life, will always hold a special place in your heart. You deserve those people. The other ones, well, they can kiss our butts. Thank you for the mention, it made me feel special. :D LOL (sorry it took me so long to get around to commenting!)
~ Dee |
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