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Heartless
Contributed by
Iesha
on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:12:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You are like a parasite that has found its way under my skin,
Everywhere I turn I feel you thriving off my pain,
I try to forget the feelings you used to give me,
But no, I am cursed to feel the presence with me everywhere for eternity.
I try to lose myself in the endless flow of music,
But I am not even safe there,
You find a way to weave your memory into my last safe haven,
Why do you do this to me?
I don’t feel a longing for your love,
But the memory of your fake love still hurts me,
It pierces my heart, soul and whole being like a dagger,
If it hurts so much, have I actually got over you?
You made me question who I am,
You made me have to redefine my individuality,
You could have made me change however you wanted,
You had a mind boggling control over me.
I try to appreciate a wonderful piece of art,
Then I see the lines form your face,
I try to lose myself in a book,
You then weave and conspire in the pages.
You are the snake of Eden,
You are there to lead innocence into temptation,
You pulled me away from the path of individuality,
Casting me into the world feeling broken and alone.
Copyright ©
Iesha
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2003-11-12 21:12:41]
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Re: Heartless
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by ToriVeigh on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:59:08 PM AEST
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| I hate to tell you this, but it will always effect you a lot. Guys have a way of doing that to you. You have a wonderful talent for clearly explaining what you feel. I really liked it. |
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Re: Heartless
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:27:57 PM AEST
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wow great write.. i can understand your pain .. i too had fake love from someone and it hurts....
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Heartless
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:56:32 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a really good poem...i liked it alot...just stay strong great poem keep writing |
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