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untitled
Contributed by
eeka_taquito
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:10:17 AM in AEST
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down goes the rain
here comes the train
mixed feelings inside me
if i leave will i be free
it really hurts when you ignore me
if you cared then you would see
im sorry i wasn't good enough
sorry if i made things tough
im just a stupid little kid
and theres no excuse for what you did
you took advantage of my feelings for you
then made the decision that we were through
i hope one day you feel like i do
i wish that day was this one,
i wish that you knew
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2003-11-13 04:10:17]
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:42:13 AM AEST
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Sad but very good writing!
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
please don't call yourself stupid? |
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:50:33 AM AEST
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| Very heartfelt and torn feelings. You are an excellent writer. Beautiful poem! |
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