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untitled
Contributed by
eeka_taquito
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:22:58 AM in AEST
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most games are fun,
but some can be cruel,
like the one you played on me,
made me feel like a fool.
should never have trusted you.
should have believed what i was told.
you may have acted the part,
but your heart was not made of gold.
i was tricked.
made to believe that you cared.
the truth was found out,
after i gave in to you and shared.
can't get back what i lost.
should have thought about it more.
you told an untrustworthy friend,
now i have the rep of a whore.
i really loved you,
i thought you felt it too.
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eeka_taquito
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2003-11-13 04:22:58]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:48:33 AM AEST
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| So much pain and torment in your words. Loss of hope. You really expressed your emotions well. I just really hope that you do not lose faith in love. Peace be with you. Excellent poem! |
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:55:01 AM AEST
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Hey honey,
I know the feeling.
this is great writing as it will surly help someone to think before.
Don't be so hard on yourself, my friend.
We all get took a t times.
When you're getting degrated he's making a fool of himself!
Hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: untitled
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 03:26:01 PM AEST
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I can relate to this and I know where yer at, but realize that soon the pain will stop and you will be able to forget. By the way before I forget its good to see more stuff from ya.
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