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Blinded
Contributed by
sweet-poison
on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 07:11:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the depths of this night,
I lie here, Blinded,
I hear you, Your voice,
Your breath pounds in my head,
Yet I dont see you,
My bed is empty,
I dare not chance a blink,
Neither rest my eyes,
For fear of missing you,
You may still be here,
Were you ever here?
Does this voice belong to you?
Or to a figment of a dream,
Yet I cannot dream,
Only lie here, Blinded,
To listen for your voice.
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sweet-poison
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2003-11-13 07:11:54]
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Re: Blinded
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 08:33:55 AM AEST
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I used to do a lot of that, it brought back memories. But I never heard other people's voices. Still don't.
Our minds are so incredibly powerful that I don't let mine carry me away any more. Your poem shows the dangers.
Good but I felt not quite as good as the Jester'
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