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The Pain I Feel
Contributed by
TracyAnn489
on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 08:18:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm tired of living this lifestyle
practically poor with few friends
even my family is totally screwed up
please tell me when all this ends
I'm told that I should tell
how I feel inside
but no matter how hard I try
I can't help but hide
I hide my true feelings
from the ones who should be there
but even if I opened up
nobody would really care
I can't take this much longer
my anger makes me want to explode
but when the depression comes
I feel as though my head and heart will implode
when I get so upset
that it brings me to tears
I always seem to realize
one of my greatest fears
that someone will see me
and I'll have to explain
what's really going on
inside my screwed up brain
I put up with more
than most people do
and then I get walked on
but that's nothing new
I put all my feelings
and some of my rage
into the words that you read
from every single page
and I pray that the reader
will feel every word
and that's when I know
that my pain has been heard
Copyright ©
TracyAnn489
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2003-11-13 08:18:00]
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Re: The Pain I Feel
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by Puffer on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:22:26 AM AEST
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| I like this poem alot, I can relate to alot of things said. Keep up the good writing! |
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Re: The Pain I Feel
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:04:16 PM AEST
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very straightforward I enjoyed this mucho. I hope you found your way out of the depression.
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Re: The Pain I Feel
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 12:56:57 AM AEST
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very sad write but a good one
great job
peace and joy
JENNA |
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