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Chocolate, Bitter Sky
Contributed by
elizasimmons
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Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 12:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Chocolate, Bitter Sky
Another night has passed;
Dawn seemed to have cast away,
The chocolate in the sky.
Dark dark chocolate,
Oh how it reminded me
The coffee with the moon.
As if she read my mind.
Touching me fraility with her smile,
Her hands on my hair
Smoothed the crumple of my heart waves.
Oh my heart waves of your ocean,
You calmed my sweats in silence.
Yet maybe because I was pulled by you,
My feelings wetted through my body.
Dark coffee, might be bitter,
Yet solitude, seemed so fine.
A chance for me, to ponder,
I ponder how many clouds in sky.
Oh your smile always brings
Wishes to my stumble heart-
I never know which wish to ask,
Yet last night you granted me a wish.
Oh moon, represent a wish so chaste,
I asked you to teach me about love.
You remained silence until I heard,
Oh how lovely was the voice of God.
Happy time seemed to evaporate so fast,
I am still trying to catch the next breath of coffee with the moon.
Yet dawn seemed to have cast away,
The chocolate in the sky.
(c)Oct 22, 2003
Eliza Simmons
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elizasimmons
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2003-11-14 12:31:32]
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Re: Chocolate, Bitter Sky
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by Suz on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:19:54 PM AEST
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| I really like how it's written. Chocolate is a beautiful analogy for the sky, and one most people wouldn't think of. Nicely done ^_^; |
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