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Memory of Forever
Contributed by
Eve
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Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 10:34:34 PM in AEST
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Sing to me a forever song, A song that promises there'll be no end. Sing it to me on and on, A song I won't have to defend.
Tell me of the forever times, When forever didn't seem so long. Tell me and weave your forever ryhmes, Ask me the tunes and the songs.
I know the songs and I know the tunes, I'll tell them, all of the ryhmes, to you. Bringing the song to reality's like catching the moon, I've tried them all and you will too.
You can try hard as you will, It won't work, forever's song is gone. It's a cup that you can't fill, Another sunset where there'll be no dawn.
So only sing to me the forever song, The song that promises there'll be no end. Even though the tune's been dead so long, Even though it's something I can't mend.
Sing because I miss the forever days, I need to remember them again. My memories're fading and there's no more always, But I don't want to let them come to an end.
Copyright ©
Eve
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by ToriVeigh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:55:57 AM AEST (User
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Great expression of the longing you must feel. |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 06:23:16 AM AEST (User
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One word: beautiful. |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 07:01:02 AM AEST (User
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I can't help it, I am completely enamored with this piece! Every time I read it I just wanna cry. But I've read it several times, and I'm sure there will be many more. Just absolutely breathtaking. |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:45:04 AM AEST (User
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I am so in love with this poem! You must be tired of me leaving messages, but it's just so enchanting. I'm obsessed! Thank you for sharing this gem with me and everyone else. |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 06:33:03 AM AEST (User
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Me again. I'm in tears every time I read this. Just so in love..... |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:31:27 AM AEST (User
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I felt the need to read this again, as it holds so much meaning and unsurpassed beauty. Once again, a tear-inducing read of a truly masterful poem.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 09:28:41 PM AEST (User
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Despite a few anomalies in the flow and context (A song you want sung, that you know, but know you can't have someone sing to you because its impossible to sing?) - I found this poem (especially in the closing stanza) a quite joyous read, that was full of poignant imagery.
I really liked this one. Not as much as some *grins*, but I still like it . ..
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:12:28 PM AEST (User
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Aiii, I've read this one too many times not to feel guilty about not commenting. I'll just kinda try to replicate the round, awed-looking eyes I had the first time I read this. Okay, okay, and the second time . . . and the third . . . and-- yeah.
But wow, was I --am I-- impressed.
--Nora |
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Re: Memory of Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:47:33 AM AEST (User
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...I think now, more than ever, this poem has the most profound of meanings for me. You know i've always loved this, and always will.
Keep writing (or i'll be forced to comment on this 100 times),
-V.S. |
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