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Decision
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
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Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 11:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I see the darkness creeping all around
Im tired, Im jaded, I jump at every sound
The world around me is reeling
He thinks my peace is for stealing
Ill show him that hes wrong
Hell not get forgiveness with his song
For this time, I wont give in
My heart, he will never again win
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ToriVeigh
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2003-11-14 23:51:05]
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Re: Decision
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 11:56:31 PM AEST
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Very good, strong,up beat write!
great work!
peace, joy, luv,
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