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Blind and Stuck
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:33:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hardened my heart
and swallowed my tears.
Now I find it just won't beat.
How can it be when I've
overcome all of my fears?
What is it that you see?
My body is going to bleed
I'm fighting too hard
feeling like I could just break.
I look in the mirror
but I know what I am.
You'll never see what
is behind my dark eyes.
Won't matter what
I show you my dear
'cause you'll only see
what you're wanting to see.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-15 00:33:31]
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Re: Blind and Stuck
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by ToriVeigh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:41:08 AM AEST
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| I understand the feeling behind this poem. You did a good job expressing it. |
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Re: Blind and Stuck
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:00:49 AM AEST
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yeah!
very good!!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Blind and Stuck
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:32:08 AM AEST
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| great poem. its much easier to build walls than to tear them down sometimes you just have to put it all on the line and follow blind faith.....someone might just surprise you. |
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