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SUicide committed
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I drown in my tears
away go all my fears
no one would give a helping hand
none of them would understand
I lie in my blood as the rain pours dwon
all the people pass me by
looking down and asking why
Suddenly someone stopped and began to cry
because they didn't want me to die
as he sat and looked at me
there I was my spirit finally free
Lonliness was all they could see
I watch as their lives drown in sorrow
they are lost souls wondering aimlessly
there is no one there to set them to the correct path
I am gone
they are wondering waywardly in sorrow
if only i had knew about what was ahead tomrrow
I might have stayed here
Looking down upon them
I feel their gloom
they are all heading for doom
Why oh why did i leave the world so soon?
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-15 01:17:28]
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Re: SUicide committed
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:22:10 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one Jenna. |
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Re: SUicide committed
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:08:14 AM AEST
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This write was sad for sure...but you're still here for tomorrow and I hope it was what you needed. You are strong and stay strong...even through your poetry. Thanks for sharing this good write. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: SUicide committed
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:19:41 AM AEST
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Great wrting for a 15 yr old!
Much wisdom in these words1
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: SUicide committed
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 05:54:44 AM AEST
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| Wow. That one really hit home with me. |
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Re: SUicide committed
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:11:27 AM AEST
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I'm glad you're still here.....
God bless,
Jellybellyprincess |
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