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Sweet Little Hate
Contributed by
sindi-selde
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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People look at me and say how sweet. A girl with her hair in two braids. Each one as thick as most peoples whole hair. A simple skirt. Elegant folds of emerald velvet. Splayed across a chair. Crocheting in maroon splayed across it. White and maroon, emerald and a deep dark brown. My body splays as well. Unless I don't like you. My shoulders hunch. My eyes grow wide and fearful. I crochet quickly and silently. When you leave, I laugh with joy. They say I'm so sweet. I am in some ways. You have never met a sweeter girl. Even though I lie and cheat. When I love you, you are safe. You are safe or I will make you safe. My love is easily gotten if you have the right eyes. Eyes I feel comfortable staring into. Then there is You. I don't like you. You scare me more than I have ever been frightend before. Your laughing eyes have shadows. You are a terrifying man. You are unlike the others in our family. You are tall and blonde and I hate you. I always have. I feel sick in your presence. You are a cloud over humanity. One the world cannot see. But I can. I am the only ***** one. Oh, the power you have over me. I am terrified thinking of you.
You.
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Re: Sweet Little Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:24:47 PM AEST (User
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I love it. Of course. Makes me shudder to read it . . . this sounds stupid, but who are you thinking of? Is it . . . the person we mentioned who frequently calls . . . her father? I'm not sure I want to know . . . |
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Re: Sweet Little Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:32:00 PM AEST (User
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BTW, I rated it a five. :-)
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Re: Sweet Little Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST (User
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You use words that a lot don't use and that is interesting...and this write I feel has a disturbing feel to it...which some do experience. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Sweet Little Hate
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:36:34 PM AEST (User
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i hope that you never have to see this man again. live in peace and happiness your friend doug |
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