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Dear Lord
Contributed by
Calista
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 12:08:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"Dear Lord"
Dear Lord, help me please,
Today I'm on my knees.
I'm so confused and scared,
I need to know you cared.
Today I let the world see,
The feeling inside the deepest me.
My tears are drying now,
My question is, how?
How can a girl just like me,
Never awaken from a dream?
Yesterday I thanked you,
For setting my smiles free.
And today I just can't understand,
Why I'm holding a foreign hand.
Today I doubt you, Lord.
My tears have conquered once more.
I need to know, my Lord,
If I should draw my sword.
Stand up tall and prepare to fight,
But Lord, I know that is not right.
So tired of doing it right,
Obeying the rules.
Crying at night,
And acting a fool.
Make me numb, make me immune,
Dear Lord, please stop this tune.
Help me please, dear Lord.
I'm on my knees, dear Lord...
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Calista
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Re: Dear Lord
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 12:28:27 AM AEST
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Oh so sad...I have those days, even rows and rows of those days...I'm sure that you are strong enough to get through this...a great write. All the best.
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Re: Dear Lord
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:30:08 AM AEST
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We r only human.
hang tuff!
U may seem alone but u r not.
Good explanation of feelings!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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