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The Thoughts in My Head as You Murdered Me with a Handgun (Take Two)
Contributed by
butterat_zool
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:17:43 AM in AEST
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Waiting for the light to turn.
Oh, he has a gun.
Yep.
Here it goes.
I hope it was worth it.
I hope you get what you wanted.
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2003-11-16 01:17:43]
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Re: The Thoughts in My Head as You Murdered Me with a Handgun (Take Two)
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:24:11 AM AEST
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| ummm..... how about some poetic elements? i mean, there could have been so much more to this. I'm a fan of simplicity, but this is like an incomplete sentence with no subject or predicate. |
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