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Loving you in vain
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:23:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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love you so
YOu let me go
just let me chase you
to capture your heart
or even a image of your affection
Dying for you
crying for you
I can't stop to think of myself
It's only you
Your in my dreams
when I reach out for you , you pull away
I scream for you
but my screamings in vain
I cry for you bu my tears are wasted
JENNA
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2003-11-16 11:23:47]
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Re: Loving you in vain
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by Cora-Windover on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:54:33 AM AEST
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| neat =^..^= I liked it. Hm, needs some editing (capitals, spaces, etc) but overall, good! It was also kinda short... There's just something missing, something that ties it all together. |
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Re: Loving you in vain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:17:04 PM AEST
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| I understand the poem because I have felt that way a lot of times in my life. |
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Re: Loving you in vain
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 06:40:47 PM AEST
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Sad isn't it? we've all desired something we could'nt obtain 4 whatever the reason. we r so sure it would want us if only it gave us a chance 2 prove it. A very effectice peice of writting u have here Jenn, it was frustrating me and almost made me scream out, " Give Me A Chance " won't you. lol. as always, intensly interesting your writting is. Nice going.
Ben
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