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Black soul
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:29:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Love is lostlong ago
I never saw what it was
until now
The hate in your eye when you
look upon me
I can sense the disgust for me
Deep in your heart
sucking out my spirit
you take everything I am or
was becoming
stealing my soul
only to turn it bitter and black
why didn't you just admit
there is nothing there for me?
Only yor hate
only your emptiness
You fill me up and leave me cold
with nothing but a blackened desolate
soul
JENNA
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2003-11-16 11:29:14]
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Re: Black soul
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by texasw97 on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:32:48 AM AEST
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| Nice..I like it. I think it is good to write out your inner most feelings. It's like taking a deep breath and exhaling..Coolio..nice work..and yeah, I can relate |
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