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The search
Contributed by
harshreality
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:22:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hopelessness pours onto me,
And flows down to the depths of my soul;
With each drop I feel......
A little less lifeless,
A little more alone,
A little more afraid;
That lacking love will always keep me from feeling whole.
Frightened by the thought-
Of drowning in a sea of lonliness;
I have to find some release,
So I let the hopelessness and the sadness
Gently stream down my cheeks;
I swallow hard, to keep from choking on despair........ And continue my search
For the one who will truly care.
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2003-11-16 17:22:43]
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Re: The search
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:39:06 PM AEST
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| This is sad but its a good write. Hope you find the one your looking for. |
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Re: The search
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:42:12 PM AEST
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| hang in there good poem |
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Re: The search
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by RealmX on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:51:46 PM AEST
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| I've been there myself. Found someone who I thought loved me and then found them backstabbing and lying to me. Good imagery and great write all around! |
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Re: The search
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:54:37 PM AEST
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oh wow just my
thoughts exactly
my fears exactly
my hopes exactly
my life... exactly |
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