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Before the almighty falls
Contributed by
RebeccaBoucher
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:06:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Im calling out
Oh hard callous frightening world
Where I look down the signs flow over mountain over sky
Giving me what I want
Not one small smile to bring in day
The heavy laughter surrounding the order
Remorse drifting in the air
A fatal glimpse of whats to be
Before the almighty falls
I can see death
I can see pain
Im calling out
Distress follow my stride
Before the almighty falls
Take me away
Before the almighty falls
Copyright ©
RebeccaBoucher
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2003-11-16 18:06:20]
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Re: Before the almighty falls
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by RealmX on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:17:09 PM AEST
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| Very powerful poem. It can have so many different meanings in it as well... I almost take it as the end of the world, but that's just my twisted take on it :) Anyway, great write! |
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Re: Before the almighty falls
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 08:44:55 PM AEST
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Great write! I enjoyed reading it.
mckayla |
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Re: Before the almighty falls
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:50:20 AM AEST
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| Welcome to the site, and a very emotional and powerful write. Awesome poem! And again welcome! |
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Re: Before the almighty falls
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by erniej on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 01:32:10 PM AEST
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| I hear a need to feel safe with things promising stability and a fear of change. Also a feeling that Rebecca feels that she lacks the emotional skills of wgat she will face in the future. |
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