|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
No Wings
Contributed by
Eve
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:49:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
An angel came to me,
And taught me how to fly.
Then my angel flew away,
Unknowingly taught me to say goodbye.
A demon stumbled upon me,
He came and taught me wrong.
That was all I'd been since my angel left;
I'd been false all along.
The angel who I'd once known,
Returned to me years after.
Showed to me the truth,
My angel taught me laughter.
My demon came back later,
And asked what that sound was.
I told him I was happy;
My demon turned to dust.
When my angel came to me,
I was already cursing things.
My angel turned his back,
And suddenly had no wings.
I tried so hard to explain,
That I had lost a friend.
But my angel started to dissolve,
And explained it was the end.
Copyright ©
Eve
... [
2003-11-16 18:49:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: No Wings
(User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 09:59:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is a great poem that explains the battle of life. Great Job. lokk forward to reading more of your work!
Diana |
|
|
Re: No Wings
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 05:58:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I'm not sure what to say about this. Everything you've written is just so perfect. From my heart, thank you for sharing your gift with us. |
|
|
Re: No Wings
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:37:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This read like some kind of picturesque dream. I liked reading it, because it was curtly expounded and to the point.
Good poem. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
