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Singing the final song
Contributed by
irshprnss
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:31:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't know if I'v lost you
If the beats already gone
I don't know what to do
That I haven't already sung
I don't know if to let go
Or continue to hold on
I'm ready to give up
I'm singing the final song
The lyrics may not flow right
But whose to say their wrong
Whose to judge to go or stay
When the rythems not that strong
The choris is already over
The ending seems too long
So should I stand here and play forever
Or sing the final song
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irshprnss
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2003-11-16 22:31:56]
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Re: Singing the final song
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:45:02 PM AEST
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| hopefully you havent sung your final song for i look forward to more of them great poem |
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Re: Singing the final song
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:29:29 AM AEST
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awww so sad but a great write as ususal.. hang tough.. things will get better
peace
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Re: Singing the final song
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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Oh this poem touched me deeply. How many times have I stood and wondered if I should sing the last song. But most of the time, I don't because it would be wrong.
Very thoughtfully created, and taken as such.
I really enjoyed your poem very much!
Almost like a song.
lovingcritters
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