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Riding In Fall
Contributed by
sindi-selde
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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nothing moves in the crisp autumn air
until by unspoken agreement by the horse and rider they move forward
his hoofs crackle the dry leaves
yellow
red
orange
brown
the horse stops and they watch leaves falling
falling
falling like snowflakes
each one different and beautiful
snowing leaves
soon the leaves shall melt into snow
as fall melts into winter
like the bodies of the lone companions melt into one
they are one
no signal but the magic of there own intertwined thoughts passes between them
as they stir the woods quiet with a trot
the spell is broken
birds chatter in the once quiet air
but they are still one
and always will be
Copyright ©
sindi-selde
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2003-11-16 23:16:01]
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Re: Riding In Fall
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:18:56 PM AEST
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| i was there riding with you on this one, great job your friend doug |
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Re: Riding In Fall
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:21:58 PM AEST
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| Not bad, not bad at all. Nice visuals-- "snowing leaves" and such give a great mental picture. Nice. |
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Re: Riding In Fall
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:21:57 AM AEST
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Jus beautifull!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Riding In Fall
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by Tanna on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:12:10 PM AEST
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Reading this brings on peaceful feelings. Nicely written :)
~T |
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Re: Riding In Fall
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:34:32 AM AEST
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| you painted a pretty picture :) |
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