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Sentimental
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Flipping through the photo album
The blade slicing each picture in two
Tears well at the corners of my eyes
Good memories are far and few
Thrown without care in the back of a drawer
Keepsakes of days I'll never relive
Emotions kept forever as simple mementos
All I have left in this world to give
From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment
As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment
Desperately seeking what I need most
Do I deserve it or am I insane
It's getting darker every night
The lights are off at memory lane
Amity a vague concept
Drowning in a pool of falsehood
As I reminisce over my tangible memories
Wasting away and hoping for something good
From my heart and through my wrists
Onto your hands
Flows my sentiment
As I depart my words insist
Of my hatred
You're the embodiment
Flipping through the pages of my life story
Unwritten the last chapter remains
Wanting to be the picture in the locket
Loved or not I'll die the same
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2003-11-17 06:21:34]
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Re: Sentimental
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:53:35 AM AEST
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| So sad and painful....awesome poem! |
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Re: Sentimental
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by Tanna on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:03:31 PM AEST
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You definately have a talent for bringing the reader into the poem, and experiencing the emotions first hand.
Excellent write.
~T |
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Re: Sentimental
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by zaowhvn on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:31:19 PM AEST
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| oh my god thats awesome. mirrored feelings of my own. this is the best |
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Re: Sentimental
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:52:07 AM AEST
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Well, color me impressed. If not one of your best, then certainly up there. I can almost hear the music it's sung to . . . .
Adored the imagery. These vivid pictures will be running around my head for quite some time, I expect.
Beautiful.
--Nora |
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Re: Sentimental
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by Kie on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 04:53:04 PM AEST
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| This one just breaks my heart. So filled with sadness but it calls to me. The ending regarding the locket was the clincher. I think i'll read it yet again. Kie |
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Re: Sentimental
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:09:47 PM AEST
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| I can definately sympathize, espeacially today. |
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