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Hello Again
Contributed by
Rissa
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:32:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hello again,
Here we go again
Staring at the wall from just inside my bedroom door.
Another wasted day
So here alone I pray...
But nothing numbs that feeling, 'cause I've been here before.
Hurting so much inside,
All those tears I left uncried
It's just the one thing I can count that keeps me here and holding on.
So now where do I go?
It's all just one generic show!
And admission stands for all I've had that's gone.
I can't make it through the day
When I'm living life this way
Disappoint myself with every goal I set.
Living one day at a time,
Until I lose my mind,
But I'm out of luck 'cause it's not over yet!
Copyright ©
Rissa
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2003-11-17 23:32:17]
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Re: Hello Again
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by harshreality on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 10:16:13 PM AEST
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| loved this. added it to my favorites. |
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Re: Hello Again
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by TaintedOptomist on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 11:36:53 PM AEST
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| mind blowing rissa truely, you've got me beat on all accounts. this is what i love about poetry...it's not about structure or complexity it about emotion and being able to manipulate them. you can'y go wrong if you can get people to feel anything from your work in my opinion. |
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