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My Friend
Contributed by
9-Pac
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:36:34 PM in AEST
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My friend in a locket
That lays next to my heart
I will always love you
As I did right from the start.
You were right beside me
Through the darkest of my days
It was your kind and gentle nature
That made me want to stay.
Now I hold you in my arms
Your hand still clasped around my hand
Our hearts still beat together
And youll be off to a new land
Through the hours I held you
Before the light did leave your soul
I tried to think of a way to keep you
Forever in my hold.
But your life slipped out of mine
On a quiet spring-like day
And I knew a part of you
Was always here to stay.
My friend in a locket
That lays next to my heart
I will always love you
Even though we had to part.
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9-Pac
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2003-11-17 23:36:34]
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Re: My Friend
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by Rissa on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:39:17 PM AEST
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| Good imagery through all of it. I liked the last verse especially. |
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Re: My Friend
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:51:20 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and flowing a wonderful tribute to your aunt, it brought tears to my eyes you really touched me here.Welcome to YPDC
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Re: My Friend
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:38:46 AM AEST
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I'm sorry about your loss but this a beautyfull testiment to her.
Very good!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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