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The Fade from Dark to Light
Contributed by
zaowhvn
on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:55:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Emptying his memory of her with a barrel of a gun
He enters a deep sleep of eternal peace bringing
Prolonged suffering to the people who truly loved him
Forgeting thoughts of one day he will find a girl
That won't paint his memories with blood and roses
But cover up the existing mural of surrealistic dreams
With purity and words without poison
It's sad to think memories die with a person
Just think of all the things he never told anyone
Clouds of smoke now replace those memories and
What used to be his brains
Meanwhile she sits contimplating on dialing
The seven numbers to her heart
She realizes there is need to lie to herself anymore
So she keeps calling back
At least a dozen times in a half an hour
She needed to tell him that she was sorry and how she truly felt
And it doesn't matter at all if he didn't understand
He would accept it
He would have
If he was still alive to answer the phone
But she waited too long
And lives the rest of her life with the night before
As her last words to her true love
Copyright ©
zaowhvn
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2003-11-18 00:55:11]
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Re: The Fade from Dark to Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 05:28:09 AM AEST
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| Are you psychic? Are we the same person? The parallels of this experience to my own are rattling. I can see why it's your favorite. Absolutely stunning piece. |
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Re: The Fade from Dark to Light
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 10:57:58 AM AEST
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| Zao this was a really good piece. It comes close to many I believe. Excellent write. |
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Re: The Fade from Dark to Light
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:18:49 AM AEST
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on your voting thing someone gave you a 1 as a vote well im just saying there is no way this poem should have gotten that and the person who did that i just dont understand why. Good work
woei Queen |
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