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now its gone
Contributed by
loopylou
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:12:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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guilty of leading me on
blind folding me as i cross so many corners
untill i walk into the walls and cry
you let me go
with a peck on the cheek still linguring
and never ending memories
with the mocking taughnt
"your specail"
"your specail"
"your specail"
as you gave me that ring
and then without a regret changed your mind
no guilt
you do this all the time
but my feelings stay with me
they cant fly like yours
they wrap and my neck and choke me
your small mind dosent understand
ill dumb it down to
i hate myself for missing you
i hate myself for being so understanding
i hate myself for not hating you
and i follow as you lead
knowing yet again
you will kill me softly with your simple emotions
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Re: now its gone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 08:03:39 AM AEST
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Sad but very good writing!
I know the feelings but I had 2 split with him and in time the pain eased and now I'm happy that I ended it.
good luck.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: now its gone
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by 13Hopes on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:26:22 PM AEST
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I agree. Good write.
Cheers...
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Re: now its gone
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry hun. A very good poem came out of it.. Someone better will come along soon. Hope. |
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