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Contributed by
minnesotarose
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 06:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I could be anywhere
I chose to, right now,
I would be with you.
Predictions are another
Long winter ahead,
I will watch the forecasts
And wait it out,
Wondering, sometimes,
What its like, where you are,
How you are,
Do you ever feel lost,
For words, you know,
You made me happy,
Brought it out,
Living the life abundant,
Nothing to do
With the weather,
Ive missed that.
It isnt like I never lost
Before, those that were,
Ran their course, perhaps
Some left a mark,
More or less, but you,
I cant reason it out,
Let it go, maybe
You meant more to me
Than anyone else,
Everything else,
It may be that simple.
Like refuge in an unlikely,
Uncharted place,
After hours, years,
Caught in the rain,
You were there.
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2003-11-18 18:53:47]
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Re: You
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:40:31 PM AEST
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This write is all over the place in thought. Yet it's all pulled together by this one nameless person mentioned here and there. Love's kind of like that.... all over the place with emotions. Atleast that's what I gathered from your write. You did good =)
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Re: You
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 01:26:39 AM AEST
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| It's like thought pattern. I liked it though. |
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