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the last heart break
Contributed by
PieEater
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:40:23 PM in AEST
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please don't make me cry again
my eyes can't stand the sting
please don't make me laugh again
my heart is yet to mend
every time is see you
is a moment i love
then later regret
my heart can't take the pressure
my mind can't stand the confussion
every time i see you
i pray it's just an illusion
i pray the lord will relieve me
from this horrible pain
time after time
again and again
but that would mean i couldn't see you
i can't decide which is worse
both seem to cause such horrible hurt
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2003-11-18 23:40:23]
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Re: the last heart break
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:55:36 PM AEST
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this is a very good write
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: the last heart break
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 01:22:58 PM AEST
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| aw that is pretty depressing. im sry. but way to go i loved the poem. its got a great voice in it. :) |
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Re: the last heart break
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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Love hurts, but oh what a pain!
Nice write |
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