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waiting
Contributed by
tWiStEd
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 04:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the sun rises
extending its wide rays
touching my soft skin
the sea waves are calling out my name
longing for my touch
the green trees are swaying
as the wind blows
whispering to me sweet words
the moon is ready to stay as the sun paved way to the coming of the dark...
here.. alone as i waited
you are still not here...
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tWiStEd
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2003-11-19 04:36:35]
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Re: waiting
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by garyh on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 05:46:48 AM AEST
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| yeah this is probably my favorite one that you showed me... i love the description you give, it makes me feel that im right there when it happens... great emotion |
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Re: waiting
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:43:49 AM AEST
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| buko na kita! patricia guillermo! hahaha.. wow what a nice description! hahahaha!!! joke3! nice din kahit pano! |
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