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Still a Sinner
Contributed by
jaavys
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 01:09:43 AM in AEST
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Muhammed on the cross I saw
One early Sunday morn
When I was hit by lightning
And he began to mourn
And lightning struck Muhammed
His crown fell at my feet
And angels held my hand
While he and I did meet
It seems it was a nightmare
But I am still aware
That I am still a sinner
No matter who was there
And angels gather round
For I still have the crown
Christ or Allah disappear
And I cannot be found
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jaavys
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2003-11-20 01:09:43]
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Re: Still a Sinner
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 12:47:39 PM AEST
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| Nice juxtaposition of saviour/prophet/you. I like the idea of your hand being forced, too. Good job. |
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Re: Still a Sinner
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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Major thought provocation here. Obvious who holds the key and makes the decisions. We are all still sinners. Nice work.
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