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empty
Contributed by
tWiStEd
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:35:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There... in the road i saw you.
your face that i want to see
your touch that i long to feel
There... in the road you left me.
i don't want to see you again..
your face that brought me tears
your touch that made me hide
There...in the road i felt love.
There...in the road i lose love..
Nothing can ever bring back those times
we have been together...
because the road now is....empty.
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2003-11-20 04:35:11]
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Re: empty
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by Aika on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:14:03 AM AEST
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oh, very sad... but well written , aika:-)
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Re: empty
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:08:10 AM AEST
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I feel this...so sad...good write.
Emma. |
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Re: empty
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:34:27 AM AEST
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| ah... emptiness, that is a feeling i am far to familiar with, great poem... keep em coming x |
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Re: empty
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by garyh on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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| good write and very sad... i hope you get back on track... i love seeing you happy |
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