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murdured my daddys hand
Contributed by
PieEater
on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:51:05 AM in AEST
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daddy i'm dead
and it's all your fault
shot a murdured daddy
without the slightest hault
it was not quick daddy
i suffured
day after day
now here i am,
here i lay
but i died laughing
i thought you'd wanna know
that's one thing
the autopsey won't show
now i can join you daddy
in the heavens up high
or maybe i'll be sent to hell
for an eturnity to fry
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2003-11-21 10:51:05]
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Re: murdured my daddys hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:00:55 AM AEST
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| Wow this was a touching write & I can see where it came from! Christina |
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Re: murdured my daddys hand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:42:21 PM AEST
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yes it sounds like you are sad he is gone and want to be with him. this was a good poem comes from the heart. you know it is sad when we lose someone close to us but you have the memories of him and you can still talk to him thank you for sharing this with us it was beuitfully written from the heart
God bless you |
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Re: murdured my daddys hand
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by M2003UK on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 03:46:10 PM AEST
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| this is good write sorry 2 hear about ur dad |
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